EEEYYY another OC review. This is Django by
. She's a pretty cool artist and I recommend to check her out!
Here we go, ladies. (By the way, I'm heading out of town early tomorrow, and this might be a bit brief).I'm going for the design, the personality and trivia info, power, and the backstory.
Django is a scorpion demon who.... actually looks scary as all hell gets. Which is great! He seems like the annoying kid you want to punch in the face, because he seems to be like that selfish and mischevious child that'll either keep poking you or shove you in front of a train. Mk, I'm jumping to the personality too quick. But anyways, he is short for a 13-year-old, but this is a pretty alright size to me. I had no idea why he didn't look African until I read that Hootie bleached him, and straightened his hair. Goddammit, Hootie, and hi. Guessing by the horns, he looks to be kind of in the middle of demon ranks. This is pretty nice. I, however, don't quite get why he has only one eye. I couldn't find why he only had one eye.. maybe there is a reason? But I kind of suggest talking about it.
He's pretty much wild and selfish. And can be in a pretty childish way, this is pretty good, and some demons are like that. This is a good personality to me.
Erm, he likes Hootie's body... don't worry man I like it too but anyway, he also lives in the afterlife reaper's mansion.
His scorpion claws are pretty power enough to break wooden sticks time to time. But his main power is hypnotism. This explains his eye that has rings inside it.
Overall his backstory is pretty alright! He was a drug dealer in Nigeria, until 13, when he died of a drug overdose. It's kind of tragic, but expected.
I don't mean that as a bad thing.... And lying to the devil... that's pretty different and original! Usually, people would just take their fate. He was sent to the soul reaper and found his way to stay there.
In total, this OC recieves an 9/10. If you can possibly explain about how his eye changed, then it would be nice.
I am sorry if this seems a bit rushed. I'll redo it with a longer description that's detailed after I get back from out of town.